excellent
Overall, it is one of the best videos to grace Newgrounds, the only problem I had was that the nuke shot from the sub looked a little too big, other than that, excellence, please continue.
excellent
Overall, it is one of the best videos to grace Newgrounds, the only problem I had was that the nuke shot from the sub looked a little too big, other than that, excellence, please continue.
well done
the characters moved very smoothly and the sound went well and was synchronized.
You need to work on the text a little bit.
it was pretty good
add a little more and then maybe resubmit
uh...no
did not find it entertaining and the music did not help
Cry me a river fatboy.
same thing?
As I've said before, if the Americans are going for an all-out assault, then they don't need a recon. The voice was weird and needs changing, and the movement of the astronaut was way off, needs a lot more work and maybe you could combine the movies since they are so short.
you have seen nothing yet. check out chapter 3, it's bigger, badder and better than before
eh..
too short and did not tell anything about the story. and a few notes
1. why wasn't the ship invisible from the start
2. should give a better name for the aliens and their planet
3. why would the Anti-Christ team up with aliens? In Revelations, he doesn't need the help and I doubt that on Earth he would allow any kind of opposition against him let alone an entire fleet, besides, if they're going for a full assault, then why do they need a recon?
4. there is no need for the mature rating if there is no violence or explicit text
bring answers to these questions and maybe the 20 second short will be much better
excellent suggestions. This is based on biblical scripture, not exactly accurate. Actually the movie is quite dark actually. I mean a ship flying through asteroids is quite violent in my opinion, plus think of how dark the feel is. The explicit text occured because of the scariness of the anti-christ.
it was ok
It was fine for pixel animation, but as a Sonic fan the story doesn't work this way. If you were trying for your own point of view for the story, you made it go far too fast. Slow it down and add a bit more background to the characters. And the name change for Robotnik thing was too easy to figure out that his new name was his old just backwards. To go further, why would eggman just go right into making a robot army and want to rule over all hedgehogs and mobians and then create Shadow? Not much sense in your story. In summary, go more in depth.
eh...
looked good I guess for a beginner but needs more work such as blood. I think you tried to over sensationalized it and it didn't really make sense. poor quality jokes every do not help and needs work with music
meh I just felt like blowing the hell outta stuff, and I thought most of the jokes were ok but I didn't really make much of a comedic effort though, I dont think that even with all of the bugs and music errors, which there wasnt many of, makes it only a 2 I think you need to try animating and get back to me
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